ERROR CORRECTİON


1. When ı first heard that I had been accepted to Middle East Technical Unıversity, I was disappointed. BECAUSE I did not like Ankara as a city. But my opinions have changed over time dramatically. Because Middle East Technical Unıversity is really a different world in Ankara. 2. It has been only one month since I came here. But I got used to this environment. Because, first of all, people from all of ages in here respect to each other. 3. I love Ankara,I love my dormitory,I love my new friends, I love my department,I am content with everything which are belongs to METU. 4. If someone wants to walk , he or she can go and walk. And it is nice place to go and meet with my friends 5. We can easily see this by watching TV,surfing on the internet or maybe just looking around us.Because there are many people getting graduated from different kinds of universities but they're not even able to know what's going on around them or they don't even try to find good ways to improve the countries that they live 

There are some errors  in text for example some letters were written wrong. From all of ages  must be changed as from all ages and there are irrelavent sentences and also some clauses which were connected each other with comma but this is a wrong usage . There is a wrong pronoun usage for example with my friends must changed with her/his friends.  


CORRECT FORM OF  TEXT 

 When I first heard that I had been accepted to Middle East Technical Unıversity, I was disappointed. Because, I did not like Ankara as a city .My opinions have changed over time dramatically.  Middle East Technical Unıversity is really a different world in Ankara. 2. It has been only one month since I came here but I got used to this environment, first of all, people from all  ages in here respect  each other. 3. I love Ankara, my dormitory, my new friends,  my department and I am content with everything which are belongs to METU. 4. If someone wants to walk , there are  nice places to go and meet with his/her friends 5. We can easily see this by watching TV,surfing on the internet or just looking around us. Because, there are many people getting graduated from different kinds of universities but they do not even know what's going on around them and they don't  try to find good ways to improve the countries that they live in.