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8 Kasım 2012 Perşembe

NATURE




                                 
                 
the reason why I chose this video is that we can see the all shwdes of green. Green is a source of peace for lots of people. You can see the beauties of nature by watching this video. We have a unique nature and we neglect it. We should wake up and see the our beautiful nature and protect it.



                                                                 NATURE


I want to talk about nature  because it bewitchs me .Trees, flowers,animals , sky ,soil, clouds, rain, snow, fog, seas, oceans, rivers, peas, roses, rainbows, leave, tulips, stars...I can not count all of the beauties of nature . Every edge of nature is decorated with colourful flowers. For example there are greenful woods in somewhere but blue seas, oceans and rivers in another place. In contrast with them borderless yellow and brown deserts  in the warm parts of world. While there are borderless plains in world , very high mountains have taken their place too. While there is a beautiful earth  , there is also a perfect scene in the sky. I mean stars and moon which are all shining brightly in a darkness and there is a perfectly shining sun in the morning. We can see the gorgeous harmony. While storms , heavy winters, rains, hurricanes are in some parts of world , there are springs , summers, fresh flowers and greenful woods in the other parts of world . While some parts of world see sun , the other parts of world see moon and stars. We saw the beauties of world and If we want new generations also to see this tremendous world then we should do something to protect it.Why are we so selfish? Why do not we protect our beautiful world? Will our children be  able to see fall when yellow leaves shed consecutively?Will they be able to see winter when everywhere is full of snow and children play snowball. Will they be able to see spring when the dead nature awakes, flowers begin to show their colourful bracts, tiny green leaves show themselves? We live in a perfectly designed planet but we do not protect it. New generations also have the right to see all these beauties so we must protect this beautiful world for them. In shortly we have a perfect world to live and this world belongs to everybody.We must love our beautiful nature and do everything to protect it.







EMMA


Emma is novel by Jane Austen and I love very much it.The novel is very succesful and its film version is also very succesful . This is a nice part of it . There are two girls called Emma and Harriet. In this novel their complicated  love stories are told and their dilemmas are told in detail. The nature of womans is explained very successfuly that is,  their loves, feelings, thougts, dilemmas, wishes and everything belonging to womans are explained . One of things that makes me love Emma is that there is a nice nature in this novel. There are a small town , green gardens . flovers, villagers and  animals. In other words, an environment which a majority of people miss now and when we read Emma , I felt this peacefull environment and I felt as if I was one of these characters.Jane Austen is a very clever author and we can see her great succes in her novels.  For example there are very complex relationships and author solves all these interestingly. The feelings of characters are explained thoroughly and you may feel as if you are a best friend of these characters. When we think about all these aspects this a very succesful novel and when we think about film , this is also very  successful . The characters and environment were selected conveniently and descriptions in novel were reflected in movie in the same way and there is no evident differenceWhen you are watching this film , you can get rid of this boring and tiring world.Some people miss the past and sometimes they want to remember these beautiful days. This novel and its film version are for these people. As a result, I  liked this novel and movie very much and recommend everybody.
























ERROR CORRECTİON


1. When ı first heard that I had been accepted to Middle East Technical Unıversity, I was disappointed. BECAUSE I did not like Ankara as a city. But my opinions have changed over time dramatically. Because Middle East Technical Unıversity is really a different world in Ankara. 2. It has been only one month since I came here. But I got used to this environment. Because, first of all, people from all of ages in here respect to each other. 3. I love Ankara,I love my dormitory,I love my new friends, I love my department,I am content with everything which are belongs to METU. 4. If someone wants to walk , he or she can go and walk. And it is nice place to go and meet with my friends 5. We can easily see this by watching TV,surfing on the internet or maybe just looking around us.Because there are many people getting graduated from different kinds of universities but they're not even able to know what's going on around them or they don't even try to find good ways to improve the countries that they live 

There are some errors  in text for example some letters were written wrong. From all of ages  must be changed as from all ages and there are irrelavent sentences and also some clauses which were connected each other with comma but this is a wrong usage . There is a wrong pronoun usage for example with my friends must changed with her/his friends.  



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 When I first heard that I had been accepted to Middle East Technical Unıversity, I was disappointed. Because, I did not like Ankara as a city .My opinions have changed over time dramatically.  Middle East Technical Unıversity is really a different world in Ankara. 2. It has been only one month since I came here but I got used to this environment, first of all, people from all  ages in here respect  each other. 3. I love Ankara, my dormitory, my new friends,  my department and I am content with everything which are belongs to METU. 4. If someone wants to walk , there are  nice places to go and meet with his/her friends 5. We can easily see this by watching TV,surfing on the internet or just looking around us. Because, there are many people getting graduated from different kinds of universities but they do not even know what's going on around them and they don't  try to find good ways to improve the countries that they live in.

METU



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I think this a very beautiful and creative video. I liked it very much because it shows us past and present generations of METU FAMILY. When I watched it , I felt as if there is another family for me in Ankara. METU is a big and peaceful family and we are all very lucky for being amember of this family.I also liked the new slogan and I think it is very creative. In my opinion it is very good because all METU famiky is here. To graduate from METU does not mean that you are a member of METU no more. We are in METU now but we will graduate and our new family members will attend our bigand warm family. When new prospective family members watch this video , they will feel the warmth of this beautiful family and they will want to be a member of this warm and big family. When we think about these features of the video , it is a really perfect video to introduce METU to its lovely prospective members.

My slogan is:  BEING FROM METU IS CHANGING WORLD
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31 Ekim 2012 Çarşamba


Many Rohingya missing as boat sinks off Bangladesh

Boats on the Bay of Bengal carry Rohingya away from the violence Thousands have fled Burma for Bangladesh in flimsy boats

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About 120 people are missing after their boat capsized in the Bay of Bengal, police in Bangladesh say.
Survivors say many of those on the boat were Rohingya Muslims who have fled recent ethnic violence in Burma.
Local fishermen rescued 13 people from the boat which sank as it was transferring passengers to a larger ship bound for Malaysia.
More than 20,000 Muslims have been displaced by fighting which erupted in Rakhine state 10 days ago.
At least 80 people have died in the violence and thousands of homes have been burnt down.
Clashes in Rakhine in western Burma earlier this year uprooted more than 70,000 Rohingya.
That violence was sparked by the rape and murder of a young Buddhist woman in Rakhine.
A woman and child in a makeshift tent in a refugee camp outside Sittwe Many Rohingya have gathered in a camp outside state capital Sittwe
Reprisal attacks on Rohingya by ethnic Rakhine spiralled and the government was forced to impose a state of emergency to end the violence.
Many of those displaced in June now live in squalid camps either in the state capital, Sittwe, or across the border in Bangladesh.
There is long-standing tension between ethnic Rakhine people, who make up the majority of the state's population, and Muslims, many of whom are Rohingya and are stateless.
The United Nations describes the Rohingya as a persecuted religious and linguistic minority.
The Burmese government, on the other hand, says they are relatively recent migrants from the Indian sub-continent.
The authorities regard the Rohingya as illegal immigrants and correspondents say there is widespread public hostility to them.
In the most recent clashes, some Rohingya have accused the security forces of siding with the Rakhine and shooting at Muslims.
The government declared a curfew in the affected areas on Monday, and has deployed additional security personnel in Rakhine state, but the violence has continued.

US election: Storm blows presidential race off course


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President Obama: "The storm is not yet over"
Sandy the super-storm has blown the US presidential race off track with just a week to go until the elections.
President Barack Obama cancelled Wednesday campaign events as he stayed in Washington focusing on relief efforts for the devastated East Coast.
Republican Mitt Romney held a storm-relief event in Ohio, a state crucial to his hopes, and returns to the campaign trail proper on Wednesday.
Opinion polls show the candidates are running neck-and-neck.
Mr Romney holds a slender lead in some national surveys of the popular vote, but Mr Obama was narrowly ahead in some of the swing states that are expected to decide the race.
The storm has effectively frozen the hotly fought election battle by dominating media coverage, while muting the two rivals.
Republican praises Obama With President Obama monitoring relief efforts from the White House, Mr Romney faced the delicate challenge of trying to demonstrate his leadership abilities without electioneering amid a natural disaster.

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Mitt Romney: "Make the difference you can"
Washington DC's political analysts were meanwhile left playing guessing games about Sandy's possible implications for the White House contest.
The storm has complicated early voting already underway in Virginia and Florida and could depress voter turnout in areas with power cuts and debris-clogged roads.
On Tuesday, the president met American Red Cross workers in Washington DC and held briefings with disaster-relief managers, as well as the governors and mayors of affected areas.
Mr Obama offered his thoughts and prayers to those affected, telling them: "America is with you."
'Heavy hearts' He will tour disaster areas in New Jersey on Wednesday, accompanied by the state's Republican Governor Chris Christie.

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Although the president is not campaigning, being seen to be doing his job, and doing it well, is worth a thousand rallies”
Gov Christie has praised Mr Obama's response to the storm as "outstanding".
Such plaudits from a popular Republican governor, touted as a possible 2016 presidential candidate should Mr Romney lose, represent useful publicity for the Obama campaign.
Storm aftermath permitting, Mr Obama is still scheduled to hold rallies on Thursday in Nevada, Colorado and Ohio.
Mr Romney is meanwhile heading to Florida. The former governor of Massachusetts is to stage at least three rallies in that critical swing state on Wednesday.
The Republican candidate went ahead with an appearance on Tuesday morning in Kettering, Ohio, far from Sandy's reach, although it was converted from a political rally to a storm-relief event.
The gathering was not entirely stripped of campaign trappings - there was a biographical film about the candidate, and a country music singer who was originally booked for the rally still turned up to perform.

Race to the White House

Romney49%
Obama47%
Poll of polls, 29 October See more polls on our poll tracker
But Mr Romney did not mention the Democratic incumbent he aims to oust from the White House in next week's elecnext,tion.
"We have heavy hearts this morning with all the suffering going on in a major part of our country," Mr Romney told several hundred people, many of whom came with bags of canned goods and other items that will be shipped to the East Coast.
The Republican faced questions from reporters about a proposal he made earlier this year to funnel money from the Federal Emergency Management Agency to the states and private sector.
Mr Romney refused to answer questions from reporters about whether he intended to target the agency, which is now leading the relief effort in areas battered by Sandy.
But a campaign spokeswoman, Amanda Henneberg, said: "A Romney-Ryan administration will always ensure that disaster funding is there for those in need. Period.                                                                                

NOUNS: singular noun : preporter,proposal,area ,  plural verbs: hearths, questions , bags
ADJECTİVES: next, possible, outstanding
PRONOUNS:personal pronouns: we, you , it.   reflexive pronouns: myself , yourself , itself. interrogative pronouns: which , what, whom.
ADVERBS:time adverbs: after,until,always  place adverbs: on, in , from
OBJECTS: direct objects : disaster, hearts, incumbent   indirect objects:
VERBS: linking verbs: have, be, face    ,  transtive verbs: have face tell ,  intranstive verbs: be, intend, come. action verbs:come, make, lead. stative verbs: intend: have, be.
DEPENDENT CLAUSES: which is now leading the relief effort in areas. that will be shippedto the East Coast.  whether he intended to target the agency.
INDEPENDENT CLAUSES:Romney refusedo answer questions ,  we have heavy hearths , Romney did not mention democratic incumbent.


15 Ekim 2012 Pazartesi


BEING A STUDENT AT METU (revised)

Being a student at METU means that freedom, social activities, ceremonies, concerts, modernity, opportunities, facilities, an experienced, understanding and considerate education staff, understanding managers, a gorgeous nature and awesome environment are waiting for you. And, you know that all these aspects can not be found everywhere so you feel that you are privileged for you study at METU.
I am  proud of being a student of METU because there are a lot of opportunities to develop ourselves and attempt to a very successful and promising career. Moreover, thanks to the facilities of METU, we are educated in a scientific and critical way so that, as time passes we feel that we are gaining an outlook which can look different things, understand and particularly respect them. There is not any restriction. And when we consider about dormitories, meals and transportation facilities, I think that METU is trying to provide its students with all necessary things which it can do. In other words, when you come here you are not lonely there are someone who will protect you and make here familiar for you.
There are some problems at METU too, but when we think about all aspects of METU they are very unimportant to be obsessed with.
Finally, if there is a challenging thing, at first I am trying to cope with this problem by myself and if I can ‘t get over it, I consult senior students, generally the suggestions of them are enough to solve my problem ,but if it don’t work, I turn to official managers and thanks to their help I can handle my problem. METU is a perfect university and we are all very lucky to have opportunity to study here.